Task 8



DRAFT 1
“Learning to think in critically, analytical, and evaluative ways means using mental processes such as attention, categorization, selection, and judgment”. Stella Cottrel (2005). The implementation of critical thinking skills can be meaningful for students at the school. Since students at the school have been pointed out as “receptive”, there might be complications because the truth is never absolute and knowledge is changeable, it always evolves over time. Therefore, the implementation of critical thinking skills at the high school might have a remarkable impact on students because they will be more autonomous when analyzing data, they can identify better what is reliable from what is not and become able to express themselves coherently in front of other people.
This type of improvement for education aims at educating people for the future, reinforcing people’s capacity to brain-process development, and making people aware of what is really happening in order to make accurate decisions. That is why critical pedagogy is a key factor in this process. As a matter of fact, critical pedagogy is basically a social movement that has bases on critical theories and related traditions in education and the study of culture. In this regards, the nature of culture is remarkable since it has shaped entire societies. The way people think is because of the culture they are in. Indeed, politics are done within the frame of culture, by stating what is illegal and what is not. In this sense, teachers must work as public intellectuals not avoiding critical perspectives in the classroom. Making students aware of what is actually happening outside the classroom framework. All this factor pushes education to be as they wish it to be and not as it is supposed to be, meaning inclusive, transformational, evolving, tolerant, and much more.
First, the use of critical thinking skills in the classroom helps students’ autonomy development. When students are taught how to think critically, they will have the tools to develop their autonomy since everything they read would need to be revised and corroborated. However, learning to think critically might be tedious and exhausting. Furthermore, when the readings are too long or boring, students get tired of them and prefer doing something aside. Therefore, professors must find a way to make the learning process more appealing to their pupils.

Secondly, being critical means selecting carefully what to rely on and what not to trust. Indeed, critical thinking skills enhance students’ ability to differentiate among different pieces of information in order to identify whether the source is reliable or not. Nevertheless, there are many features of critical thinking skills a student must learn in order to identify reliable information. Additionally, students must learn to differentiate among points of view, agreements, disagreements, arguments, reflections, descriptions, explanation, and many more.

Thirdly, when you are able to think in a critical way enables you to express your thoughts more fluently because your ideas are supported and well organized. Besides, the more you read factual information, the more trustworthy, undeniable, and coherent your opinion is going to be. Therefore, students at the school are going to perform better in test or presentations. Nonetheless, Thinking critically means leaving aside all your prejudices, believes, and perhaps, your feelings because they create barriers. In fact, these barriers can create a problem among students’ contexts. As a result, it is important to identify how much those barriers are blurring your thinking because the opinion or point of view given by a student might be biased and not objective.

All in all, the implementation of critical thinking skills might have a meaningful impact at high schools because it would help students to be more autonomous not only following their own instinct but proposing new methodologies to improve the teaching-learning process, not to believe every single word they read on internet or other sources since the Internet has too much false information from people who just want to fulfill their own interests, and to express themselves in a more coherent way. In fact, the more you read or watch news or newspaper magazines or other sources, the more practice you will have identifying what seems veracious for you to express later in a class discussion or in a debate.   




  




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  1. Dear student,
    Hereby I share with you my comments on your first draft.

    Introduction: I see that your introduction has good starting points worth reflecting on. However, I would suggest revising the APA guidelines for an appropriate citation of the first source.

    First paragraph (after intro): You need to be careful from where you take the information included in your paper and how you are citing it. Omitting to cite any idea taken from a book/article/internet website DOES become plagiarism. Be careful with this idea:
    "... social movement that has developed and applied concepts from critical theory and related traditions to the field of education and the study of culture."
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Critical_pedagogy
    Besides this, some of the ideas in this paragraph are incomplete sentences. They must be revised.

    Second paragraph: Personally, I do not really think it is valid to say that reading long texts make students bored and therefore, professors should look for other ways to teach. I doubt it you can easily find support to such statement. What is more, what type of population are you talking about? Primary students? Secondary students? Undergraduate students? That clarification will clarify a lot of thing to the reader in regard to fostering critical thinking skills in the classroom. Last but not least, are we talking about critical thinking development in the L2 classroom OR as part of L1 development? Those details will lead you to take a better stance on these issues.

    Third paragraph: Even though the paragraph does not have grammar mistakes, it lacks supporting sources of information. It is necessary that all of your arguments are appropriately supported by using APA style.

    Fourth paragraph: Some of the sentences are incomplete. Check them out and make the necessary adjustments. What is more, this paragraph also needs supporting sources.

    Overall, I see that you have approached a totally different topic from the one selected at first. Even though it is indeed related to the development of critical thinking, I still need to see more of the concepts reviewed throughout the course. Critical thinking development in the classroom goes far beyond than simply being able to fostering students' autonomy, identify reliable information and express your ideas more fluently. Keep polishing your arguments and work hard on a second version.

    Regards,
    Jhon Losada

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